This is one of the first songs that I wrote and it is about a person who percieves things in a diffrent light due to what he speaks of as, Broken Glasses.
This is realization and sadness combined and has great depth but it totally depends on the reader whether he percieves this or not.
For This work I would REALLY want some critiques:
1. Did you enjoy the poem/song? If yes, then why, if no then why?
2. Did this sound more like a poem with fine rhyming/meter/form or felt better as a song?
3. Most important question What did broken glasses mean to you?
4. General comments.