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One more chance

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Literature Text

"I’d reach your soul and
clasp it through those eyes if they'd
just open again"


:bulletgreen: Surprisingly I am rather attached to Haiku's! I feel that they are a good and artistic way of putting forward short idea's that cannot be put as 6 word stories, or one would prefer to be counted as poetry. That is in a way strange since I did not write Haiku's until recently and didn't think I would be this fond of them.

:bulletgreen: Well I think the syllable count is fine. If you read it and wish to comment, what meaning/s did you get from this and if there was any impact or not. There is not much else to ask. Thank you for reading!
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:iconflyingheartsplz::happycry::iconflyingheartsplz: ... This has impacted me, it did :iconaawplz: ... I feel the desperate wish of someone who has lost a person they "secretly" loved, and they realized it was too late, once he/she died ... :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsadhugplz::iconflyingheartsplz: ... I can't deny, it made me tear up a little :iconreallysadplz:But it's so beautiful that I can't stop re-reading it :iconloveloveplz:

Great job!!! :clap::clap::clap: