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She tended to flowers through the day passing by;
she tended to flowers through the dark rising high.
She smiled as she tended and nourished the pots;
as frail as she was, this work she could not stop.
She grew each plant from each seed of each fruit
that she ate; be it weak; let it have a bent shoot.
She grew them in pots, tiny pots which she sold
"Take care" she called "they are more precious than gold!"
Her heart broke and bled and shattered some more,
when she sold pieces of her soul she yet bore.
But an old lady she was, she could not keep them all
in a house old as she was, so old and so small!
She then ushered away the children that came,
to break her little pots, for it they felt no shame.
She panted as the children laughed at "the cramped lady"
she sighed; tears welling up as she felt her belly
"Poor children ignorant you are for you don't know
the pain of losing the only child that you once sowed"
She tended the flowers as if they were her lost child;
feeling her hollow heart fill the old lady smiled.
she tended to flowers through the dark rising high.
She smiled as she tended and nourished the pots;
as frail as she was, this work she could not stop.
She grew each plant from each seed of each fruit
that she ate; be it weak; let it have a bent shoot.
She grew them in pots, tiny pots which she sold
"Take care" she called "they are more precious than gold!"
Her heart broke and bled and shattered some more,
when she sold pieces of her soul she yet bore.
But an old lady she was, she could not keep them all
in a house old as she was, so old and so small!
She then ushered away the children that came,
to break her little pots, for it they felt no shame.
She panted as the children laughed at "the cramped lady"
she sighed; tears welling up as she felt her belly
"Poor children ignorant you are for you don't know
the pain of losing the only child that you once sowed"
She tended the flowers as if they were her lost child;
feeling her hollow heart fill the old lady smiled.
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Daffodil Lament
I dream
of a field
of daffodils,
and a waveless mirror
of water
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Comfort!
Warm hand on my back
Gentle breath, soft sigh
Kind kiss of comfort.
2012 Delice1941
Updated 12th June2014
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The martyr of love
I am still a stranger in your battlefield
My rifle on my shoulder, I do not mean to fight
My tears cutting the ground under your feet
You stand over my bleeding body
Your cold blade dripping your way out
You stab me, once and twice, you grin at my wounds
My blood meets the thirsty salty soil
They greet, they hug, they mate under your feet
They give birth to the wild bloody roses
Where every wound blooms once more
I hear your walk away, leaving my barren land
I pray for death to push the arrow deeper in my back
To take the last hopeless breath, the last breeze of love
Bury me where the old moon was born
Let my head re
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This is a poem that occurred to me when i wondered how a woman may feel when she lost a child (in abortion but you can think of it as just losing a child). The theme has been well exploited but I just had a different idea so i put it forward. Hope you like it!
Critiques are MOST welcome! And comment on the poem without reading the description... if that moment has passed already, critique without considering what I wrote in the description! It is said so that the person who did not understand the poem (felt it obscure) would say "the poem is obscure" rather than read the description and say "awesome... so it was about an abortion?"
Critiques are MOST welcome! And comment on the poem without reading the description... if that moment has passed already, critique without considering what I wrote in the description! It is said so that the person who did not understand the poem (felt it obscure) would say "the poem is obscure" rather than read the description and say "awesome... so it was about an abortion?"
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I liked the metaphor, it's much softer and it explains the subject in a delicate way. Abortion is a very polemic issue and it causes great pain to whoever women/couple who has to face it (even if they decided to do it).
Anyway, after I read the description I interpreted the poem in a different way: the love for nature and how important she is to our survival and well-being. It's also true that most people don't pay attention to its beauty and are less happy because of it.
Either way I think this is a great poem, with many layers of interpretation, but that always touches our heart.
Anyway, after I read the description I interpreted the poem in a different way: the love for nature and how important she is to our survival and well-being. It's also true that most people don't pay attention to its beauty and are less happy because of it.
Either way I think this is a great poem, with many layers of interpretation, but that always touches our heart.