True Silence is something not achievable. It is something that many don't get and others think they know it. While much of this seems made up... I did once hear the strumming and the hum behind it like a piano being played and I could tell... it was inside my head perhaps but it was not outside. And it was sinister.
Now if you have the time to critique it (which would be very welcome) this is what I would like to know:
1. Did the idea seem absurd to you? Explain and tell out of 5, how much it made sense to you.
2. Did it keep interest?
3. Did the language seem fine or overdone?
4. Was the end, if not very impressive, satisfying?
5. Did it have any effect on say... your emotional side?
6. General comments.