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Hmm... so this was a unique piece and for some reason I was expecting it to be a rather happy and soft piece. But then again I don't think that being a rule.

The work was clearly emotional. There was frustration and anguish if I were to use words. There are many such works and they somehow fail to convey to the reader yet the formatting in your work made me feel a bit disheartened along with your words. Perhaps it also matched a specific work of mine so I felt somewhat conected.

Anyway the way you wrote was not only emotional or frustrating. There was the feeling of control in your words. As if you are expressing these emotions rather than feeling tham at the exact moment.

At least that is the way it felt to me and personally I like it. Overall a good work. I enjoyed it :)
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Sammur-amat Dec 4, 2012   General Artist
Thank you so very much for taking the time to write up such a thoughtful critique, dear friend. :hug:
Which specific piece of yours? Link me, please! :la:
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NotenSMSK Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eh... it is not as you might think ^^; [link]((Reflection%20in%20the%20mirror)%20AND%20(by%3Anotensmsk))&qo=0 but it is quite a deep piece :nod: You are very welcome :) there were expressions that I loved (crutches sown under armpits) but I was unable to discuss them :hmm:
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Sammur-amat Dec 4, 2012   General Artist
This piece of yours is incredible :heart:
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NotenSMSK Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh really? Thank you for thinking so :huggle:
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Sammur-amat Dec 5, 2012   General Artist
You are so very welcome! :heart:
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