The burden of ImmortalityIf my immortal heart wouldn’t waver with every sad predicament
This is quite a fine work. A bit different from what I have previously read of your works but I think it works well enough
I like the theme and how you have managed the thought of being immortal and the italics add a beautiful touch, like it is the inner person speaking... one that usually does not come out. So a really good piece in my opinion
I would be willing to carry it
the story was clear enough... unless there is a lot more than I saw in love and the passing of time as one keeps on existing.
It depends on what love is for you. Some might debate that since the one you loved is dead, you don't love them anymore. Others may say that we love the dead and shall keep on remembering them (keep on loving them). A counter argument to this is that time will make you forget your love eventually.
Well there is no happy goal remaining... no goal actually. This is a deep discussion and so I won't go in detail. other than growing redwood and see if they live longer than you and count the leaves of it... well there is little to do. So, boredom.