Feature #3

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Now this came out rather late but I was too busy to give out a journal so forgive me. I am glad to know that I have many libran friends - gives me a feeling of closure. Now the person's who I will feature, though their birthday has passed, is :iconangeloflight03: AngelofLight03

Happy belated birthday! :squee::happybirthday:Sadly, I am wishing everyone with the journal which, though outdated does have the purpose of featuring the person on the birthday. Hope your Bday went well and you enjoyed lots! Angel is a sweet person who for some reason does not choose to talk much but is responsive and soft otherwise. Her works, though simple, are really touching. I hope you enjoy the feature :huggle:

Because of YouBecause of you I have changed,
Because of you I am afraid of what might happen.
I lost the person I was,
And I couldn't get her back.
I gave up trying,
Because you gave up on me.
Now this girl doesn't look back,
Now she looks at life in a whole new way,
This girl only cries when the world becomes too much for her.
This girl has lost her way, and found it again
All because of you.
Because of you I have changed,
And I know it's for the better.
Because of you I am afraid of what might happen,
But I go on with life anyway.
I lost the person I was,
And I found a whole new one.
I couldn't get the old me back,
But this new person will do just fine.
All I needed was for you to stay,
All I wanted was you in my life,
But because of you I am fine on my own.
By: AngelofLight03

This work reflects a person's adoration for one specific other person, one that changed their lives.

Over YouI've spent too much time trying,
I've wasted too much time crying.
I felt like I was in a trap,
And I have felt like crap.
It's not you, it's me.
I've held on for too long.
Hoping I would get my chance.
I just wanted romance.
It's time to go.
I need to lose the crush,
But I know my heart was in a rush.
I thought I was never going to get through,
But I got over you.
I know I need to get out.
I'm not sure what this crush is about.
All I know is that I want you so bad.
All this waiting has made me sad.
You don't even know.
But I don't want to tell you now.
I know I have to let go,
And live life for my own.
You'll be gone soon.
And I'll feel alone.
Oh I wish you knew.
How much I grew.
It's time to go.
I need to lose the crush,
But I know my heart was in a rush.
I thought I was never going to get through,
But I finally got over you.
By: AngelofLight03

Another sweet work relating to a cruh on a person and getting over it she didn't like my comment on it I think

It's Not OverWe have fought,
We have loved,
But it's not over.
We gave each other everything.
Our love was so real.
But everything just went south from there.
I can't believe we're at this point in our lives.
I can't believe we have to fight so hard.
Only a miracle can save us now.
We have fought,
We have loved,
But it's not over.
Hang in there just a little longer.
I know we can get through this,
And make everything right.
We're fighting to keep this love alive,
But it gets harder every time.
Keep fighting for us,
Keep the love alive,
Because it's not over between us yet.
By: AngelofLight03

A poem that reflects that conflicts or problems are not the end of everything that we know and so we should keep striving.

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This is a poem that gives a hint of what might be hidden behind ones eyes in truth.

Already GoneI've wasted too much time,
I've fought for you,
But maybe I didn't fight hard enough
Because you're already gone.
I gave you all the love that I could give,
And I tried to make this up to you.
But you're already gone.
Our love was like poison waiting to take over,
And end this madness.
We were sinking in the quick sand,
And changing way to fast.
You know I loved you.
You know I cared,
But you didn't acknowledge that.
Somehow I became the enemy,
And everything was my fault.
I've wasted too much time,
I`ve fought for you,
But you didn't fight for me.
So I was already gone.
By: AngelofLight03

Already gone... a really well written poem about someone who is no longer around... someone who is already gone.
I know I am a lot behind schedule but that seems to be there no matter how hard I try. So no worries ^^ Thank you for reading and take care!

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I liked what you had to say. The feedback lets me know what I need, and do not need to improve on. I know in that birthday feature that you did about me said that you were not sure if I like what you had wrote, but I am here to tell you that I did. And I appreciate what you have to say. I know I don't seem to talk a lot but I think that's because I am shy, but if you want to talk to me I have no problem. :D