Feature # 7

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Hello everyone! I hope you all are doing just as fine as I am meaning to say that they have pathetic grades in their mids and are gaining weight by sitting all day??. I apologize for my recent inactivity and I hope that I have not been too inactive. I have studies and a lot in real life so sorry again. Now moving onto the birthday features...

first I will point out a person who's birthday skipped my mind and I was unable to feature them sadly. I will feature them now! With their birthday on 22nd October :iconmysticstar875:Mysticstar875 Happy birthday! This person has comparatively small number of works but quite wonderful quality! An example would be in the works I feature!

Second with her birthday on 29th October is :iconpuffie-chan:puffie-chan a person who is very shy and does not talk much but has amazing work! I love her writing with its meaning and its rhyming the ones I have read at least. DO go and look through her gallery! I do hope that you like it!

The last person to feature is :iconmiss--understood:Miss--Understood with her birthday on 31st October. Miss Understood has a wide range of themes on which she writes but she tackles them quite well. I hope I can read her latest works soon!

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Now for featuring. First of all, :iconmysticstar875:
The Tragedy of Romeo and JulietThe lovers...
They won't stop
Crying
The families...
They won't stop
Fighting
The boy...
He won't stop
Spying
The girl...
She won't stop
Lying
And now...
They lie in blood that's
Drying
What if...
Their parents stopped
Fighting
Then maybe...
The lovers wouldn't be
Dying

Perhaps not her best work but it is unique in both writing style and feel. It picks up an old story and discusses an aspect of it many might have thought but none would have explored.

Super NovaThere's a universe between your emotions and my feelings.
It takes a thousand light years for my smile to register on your lips,
And even then it comes out diluted
As if washed away by sand.
There's a galaxy between your stirrings and my movements.
When we touch, stars collide...
And it creates a black hole;
I can't help but get sucked into its grasp
Just to be crushed by the thick nothingness of your eyes.
We work like a solar system,
But I'm Pluto.
You say I act as though the whole relationship revolves around me
Yet you're my sun.
We're destined to collide,
But not fast enough for me.
And as I keep reaching out for you,
You keep sending me solar flares.
We're on opposite sides of planet Earth.
I'm with the polar bears and you're with the penguins.
They tear at my heart when I tear at the ice to reach you,
But I only have a spoon to dig
And your jacket to keep me warm.
A country is what holds us apart.
My lack of mobility keeps me here
While your friends pin you down
Like the tent yo

Super Nova... quite a strong expression and although, not used in the work itself, it does have its own appearance in the work. Quite well written.

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A work that reflects on both the sides conflicting in ones mind. Quite well written and I really enjoyed this piece. Strong and emotional.

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Now featuring :iconpuffie-chan:
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A short work that is so beautifully expressed that I could not help but clap at the end goodgiddy goo it was just wonderful. The rhyming works so wnderfully in her works! This is just one example of that!

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Another work on a slightly different theme yet having a totally unique approach. Again, this demonstrates quite well used rhyming. Truly enjoyable!

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Beautiful as always, perhaps with a similar theme but then again everyone has their own inspiration!

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Now finally, featuring :iconmiss--understood:
Darling, I want to destroy youYou walked with confidence and your smirk was devilish. You grinned and swayed your hips to the music.
We both know who will win here though, don't we, dear?
You play a dangerous game of cat and mouse, late nights and early mornings.
Oh, darling, why do you make this so easy for me?
You think that you have control over your own actions, but I'm playing you like we play poker.
You don't like to admit it, but you can never read my face as well as I can read yours, isn't that right, love?
You drink shot after shot but fail to notice your slurring words and swaying body.
I'll take care of you, I promise, dear.
They don't know and we don't care. We live for the night, but it's funny how you act so strong yet whimper so weakly in my arms.
Darling, I want to destroy you.

This is a work that I have not read completely but the title itself and the first glance that I gave it were quite reassuring over its contents. Beat me to it!

Getting OldI have messages in bottles
written in blood,
and words in my head
that cause tears to flood.
I have scarred knuckles
and shattered glass,
I have no reflection
or smiles that last.
I have no heart
which I'm willing to give.
I have no life,
which I'm willing to live.
What can I say,
to make you understand?
Don't grow up, dear,
nothing goes as planned.
You break and shatter,
and forget the starry night.
You cry and turn bitter,
turning away from the light.
You're so young right now,
and ask why I'm so cold.
Just remember, love,
this happens when you grow old.

Now THIS is a beautiful work that combines wonderfully crafted stanza' with witty rhyming and gives a unique and original message in the end. Just wonderful!

Painted Face and Revealing BodyShe danced in the rain so that nobody saw her tears. She smiled through pain and cried through laughter. She wore too much make-up and never enough clothing.
Who cares what they think, love? You're you.
She slept during the day and lived at night. She carved her thighs and broke her fingers.
You never wanted to write, did you, dear? How else do you let yourself feel?
Your heart was empty yet your eyes were full of emotion that didn't belong. I should be used to this now, shouldn't I?
I should be used to a painted on face and revealing clothing.
You say you never wanted attention, but what's with the acting, love?
That's just it, isn't? You didn't act. You sold.

A very different theme to write about and an even more unique approach that she seems to have taken. Amazing work as always, DO look in her works and see if you like them or not!

Now this is all for today, I will probably be writing a few important journals soon. Hope all the best for you, take care and bye!

If anyone has problems with them being featured here, OR my inner voice, do tell me!

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silvergabetha834's avatar
Nice feature! I especially liked "Darling I want to Destroy You" by Miss--Understood.