Feature # 2

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Now today... (I am perhaps two days late already) it is Cinders8328 :iconcinders8328:a sweet mother who is deeply attached to her little daughter and sadly has had a hard time with life but is living through it. That is the beauty of it! She takes care of other people, considers their problems before her own and very rarely is she depressed to the extent that she cannot cheer someone else up.

She writes short works mostly, around a soft and emotional theme that coud bring tears to ones eyes although some of her works are long but they are worth it. Her works are either about love or hope and depression and a person who wants to, can learn a lot from them!

Happ Birthday Cinders and I don't know whether your day went well or not but I still hope that you managed to pass it with a smile on your face and even if not that, I hope your day was better than before and that you are living with a happy future ahead!

Now to her works.

Pouring my heart outYOU ARE NOT ALONE,
did you hear me?
You are not alone!
It is not your fault,
It isn't, hey, DID YOU HEAR ME?
Are you listening?
There is hope!
There is love,
Happiness is a choice
but you have to try to overcome the pain first,
you have to decide that whoever hurt you is not worth your anger
That you WILL NOT let them control your life or emotions
That you are stronger than they are
BECAUSE YOU ARE A BETTER PERSON
Because you are loved
Because you would never hurt someone the way you have been hurt
You are hope,
It's there, I can see it in you.
I can feel it in your words and yes,
even in your pain.
I know that you can do it
It isn't easy, but you are not alone,
The hurt rise up to protect each other,
from distances unmeasured and with power unseen,
we are the hurt, the victims
once hopeless, now an army,
a support to help people like us
to break through the barriers that numb us,
that make us hurt us when we don't deserve it,
that convince us that there is nothing better,
but there is

This is a work meant to target people who have had problems in the past. It is to show them that they are not alone. Not alone in the sense that they have someone that cares and in another perspective they are not the only ones sufferring so stop getting depressed cuz I hate it.

Roses are red points contestRoses are red,
Violets are blue,
You are blushing now,
my cheeks are red too,
of all the flowers I have seen,
The colors in your face,
Are without compare,
everlasting grace.
:heart:
Cinders

A soft, rather gentle work that brings a smile. It might be taken in depth and seen as the feelings of a poet or else it may be considered a play of expressions. A soft sweet work.

My Wish for YouA love that lifts up to the heavens
A love that superbly never ends
A love that you only find to be true
One that makes you come unglued
I wish that, you could find this
A love overcome with pure bliss
but remember once you find it
hold on tightly every minute
In all that can be said and done
I hope that you will find your "one"
Your happiness must come from another
love you deserve will be like no other
Someone who will show your worth
And give love's meaning a second birth
Someone who treasures your heart and soul
A person you feel you always know
Some troubles, will come and go
But stick together and far you'll go
I wish these things for you my dear
with all my heart, perfectly clear

This was a challenge given by me. Actually the phrase hit me and I felt that she could write on it better than me. She did quite a nice work with the little time she had and I am really glad for it.

HerCan't you see that she's broken
just look into her eyes
promises were spoken
but then came to their demise
Where were we when she needed us
what had to come first
when all she needed was our love
we now see her hurt
She needed a few moments
we told her go and play
but all she wanted was us
to play with her everyday
When all it takes to love someone
is a kind and gentle word
So that they can feel free
to fly up like a bird
When understanding's what she needed
pushed aside is what she got
but we can change her future
to give what she has not
I cannot change the past
but my love for you does last
everything love will surpass
so do not feel downcast
Please let my love heal you
let it stir inside your soul
for everyday with out you
is another I'm not whole
I know you know I love you
I did before you were born
I wish no one had hurt you
I wish you never had felt torn
If I could steal your pain
and turn it into rain
that could wash away the stain
so the hurt would not remain
I would give the

A wonderful piece with a really impressive meter and wonderful expressions that make one want to read this again and again (at least did that for me).

Addy at the lake by Cinders8328
Now I don't usually do (unless the artist is purely a photographer) and have yet done only literature features but in the photo it is Addy, Cinders baby. She looks so cute :aww: I personally wish her the best!

P.S: If I manage to miss your bday... DO REMIND ME!

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PuddingValkyrie's avatar
I read some of her work and it feels very emotional and inspiring... that she has suffered pain, but she got back up and is still fighting.